I cant believe how much you’ve taught me,
About me, myself and I.
3 people who where lost on a long dark road, alone.
You were to me what a flame is to a harth.
A glowing light, Fullfilling and warm.
Times have changed, seasons turned. Its still cold in here,
but maybe a fire is a bit extravagant.
Now I have the sun to light my way and warm my heart.
The clouds still drift over, and the fog comes sweeping over
But the flowers withstand it a little better.
The trees stay leaved, the butterflies come out and life goes on.
Winter’s Embers
23 Sunday Nov 2014
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idyllicicycle 
I like this, it has a good feel of nature and rebirth. I really like the feeling of the warmth throughout.
My only development point would be to split the longest sentence.
To “Times have changed,seasons turned.
It’s still cold in here,but maybe a fire is a little extravagant” and drop the full stop as the next line is a follow on line.
It’s a good poem well done.
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